well not the best idea
your idea was apperently to take the slowest and very charming song from ffx and make a form of techno from it not to say this couldt have worked but i just dont think u should have tried it like this i suggest u rm this with the correct instroments u know vocals perhaps im not what the orginals are replay to this and ill find them for u anyway u have some skill in work i c but still gj and tyr to be more diverse next time its basicly 3 repeats
gl and remember its a talent it comes wiht time and only for those whom work for it